: Is it a decaying, overpopulated state penitentiary or a sleek, high-tech private facility? Use sensory details—the scent of floor wax and industrial bleach, the constant mechanical hum of sliding gates, and the lack of natural light.
My new script was darker. It was about a man who gets out, tries to do the right thing, and fails. He doesn't fail because he's evil. He fails because the system is built for him to fail. No housing. No job. No phone call returned. my prison script
